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初中英語作文記敘文寫作技巧及其范文
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記敘文是記人敘事的文章,它主要是用于說明事件的時間、背景、起因、過程及結(jié)果,即我們通常所說的五個" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一個" H "( how )。記敘文的重點在于"述說"和"描寫",因此一篇好的記敘文要敘述條理清楚,描寫生動形象。下面就談?wù)動⒄Z記敘文的特點和寫好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)。
一、記敘文的特點
1. 敘述的人稱
英語的記敘文一般是以第一或第三人稱的角度來敘述的。用第一稱表示的是由敘述者親眼所見、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷。它的優(yōu)點在于能把故事的情節(jié)通過"我"來傳達給讀者,使人讀后感到真實可信,如身臨其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人稱敘述,優(yōu)點在于敘述者不受"我"活動范圍以內(nèi)的人和事物的限制,而是通過作者與讀者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情節(jié)展現(xiàn)在讀者面前,文章的客觀性很強。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 動詞的時態(tài)
在記敘文中,記和敘都離不開動詞。所以動詞出現(xiàn)率最高,且富于變化。記敘文中用得最多的是動詞的過去的,這是英語記敘文區(qū)別于漢語記敘文的關(guān)鍵之處。英語寫作的優(yōu)美之處就在于這些動詞時態(tài)的變化,正是這一點才使得所記、所敘有鮮活的動態(tài)感、鮮明的層次感和立體感。
3. 敘述的順序
記敘一件事要有一定的順序。無論是順敘、倒敘、插敘還是補敘,都要讓讀者能弄清事情的來龍去脈。順敘最容易操作,較容易給讀者提供有關(guān)事情的空間和時間線索。但這種方法也容易使文章顯得平鋪直敘,讀起來平淡乏味。倒敘、插敘、補敘等敘述方法能有效地提高文章的結(jié)構(gòu)效果,讓所敘之事跌宕起伏,使讀者在閱讀時思維產(chǎn)生較大的跳躍,從而為文章所吸引,深入其中。但這些方法如果使用不當(dāng),則容易弄巧成拙,使文章結(jié)構(gòu)散亂,頭緒不清,讓讀者不知所云。
4. 敘述的過渡
過渡在上下文中起著承上啟下、融會貫通的作用。過渡往往用在地點轉(zhuǎn)移或時間、事件轉(zhuǎn)換以及由概括說明到具體敘述時。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 敘述與對話
引用故事情節(jié)中主要人物的對話是記敘文提高表現(xiàn)力的一種好方法。適當(dāng)?shù)赜弥苯右Z代替間接的主觀敘述,可以客觀生動地反映人物的性格、品質(zhì)和心理狀態(tài),使記敘生動、有趣,使文章內(nèi)容更加充實、具體。試比較下面兩段的敘述效果: (
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
這本來應(yīng)是一段故事性很強的文字,但經(jīng)作者這么一寫,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是敘述模式,沒有人物語言,把"懸念"給沖淡了。可作如下調(diào)整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.
二、寫好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)
1. 頭緒分明,脈絡(luò)清楚
寫好記敘文,首先要頭緒分明,脈絡(luò)清楚,明確文章要求寫什么。要對所寫的事件或人物進行分析,弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展一直到結(jié)束的整個過程,然后再選取素材。這些素材都應(yīng)該跟上述五個" W "和一個" H "有關(guān)。盡管不是每篇記敘文里都必須包括這些" W "和" H ",但動筆之前,圍繞五個" W "和" H "進行構(gòu)思是必不可少的。 集整理
2. 突出中心,詳略得當(dāng)
在文章的框架確定后,對支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍,應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的需要出發(fā),分清主次,定好詳略。要突出重點,詳寫細(xì)述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié),略寫粗述那么非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。面面俱到反而使情節(jié)羅列化,使人不得要領(lǐng)。這一點是寫好記敘文要解決的一個基本問題,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破壞外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
話題作文寫作模板
中考英語考前必備--話題作文寫作模板
Nowadays, there are more and more (某種現(xiàn)象) in (某種場合). It is estimated that (相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)). Why have there been so many (某種現(xiàn)象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is (原因一). Besides, (原因二). The third one is (原因三). To sum up, the main cause of (某種現(xiàn)象) is due to (最主要原因). It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (解決辦法一). On the other hand, (解決辦法二). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of (某種現(xiàn)象).
利弊型作文寫作模板
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測)
1. 說明事物現(xiàn)狀
2. 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(或一方面)
3. 你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------------(A的優(yōu)點之一). Besides -------------------(A的優(yōu)點之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(對前景的預(yù)測).)
英語旅游日記
我是一個美國學(xué)生,來中國旅游,去了長城、天安門等地方,詞數(shù)不少于60個,注意要用過去式,開頭已給出:
Wednesday,August 2nd
It was a fine day!
[范文]
It was a fine day! I went to several places of interest such as the Great Wall and Tiananmen square.I was amazed by China's historical background and the industrious Chinese people who built the Great Wall. People are very friendly here. I was greeted by amiable people who were nice enough to tell me about the history of China and by modest students who later practiced speaking English with me. China has left me a wonderful impression and I look forward to come back here for the Olympics.
解決方法型作文寫作模板
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑:
1.問題現(xiàn)狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解決方法一). For another -------------(解決方法二). Finally, --------------(解決方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解決方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(帶來的好處).
闡述主題型作文寫作模板
要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進行論述.
1. 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.
2. 分析并舉例使其更充實.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that ---------------(釋義). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(舉例說明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(舉例說明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).
In my opinion, ----------------(我的觀點). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you"ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
對比觀點型作文寫作模板
1) 要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認(rèn)為。。。 2.另一些人認(rèn)為。。。3.我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點). The reason is that⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
2) 給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一). For example, they think②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一). For another thing,⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法).
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