優秀英語作文：一封信

　　一封信 The letter

　　Dear brother,

　　I’m in Guizhou now.I have many friends here. They are all kind to me.I often have breakfast with them.I like Guizhou food very much.They are nice.I am very glad to be here.

　　Yours,

　　Yang Jing

　　親愛的兄弟，

　　我現在在貴州，我在這里有很多朋友。他們對我都很好，我經常和他們一起吃早餐，我非常喜歡貴州菜，他們很好，我很高興能在這里。

　　你的，

　　楊晶

　　考研英語作文萬能模板之請求信

　　Dear___________,

　　I am writing to formally request to___________(請求的內容)

　　The reason for ______________is that______________________________(給出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(給出細節)

　　I would also like to request ________________________(提出進一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.

　　Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(電話號碼). I look forward to a favorable reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　寫信 Letter

　　作文題目

　　假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

　　注意：1．詞數：100左右：

　　2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.)

　　范文一：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

　　Hope you will come here soon!

　　All the best!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的鮑，

　　我很高興收到你的來信，我很高興聽到你會去中國學習中文。我已經找到了你的菲亞特。在芳草街，不遠處就是我們中文學校。你可以坐11路車，前一站就是中文學校。公寓第三層有3間，其中一間是臥室，另一間是浴室和廚房。這里有一張床，一張沙發，一張桌子和幾把椅子，在這25平方米的小公寓里，租金是每月500元。也許這輛菲亞特不是你的愿望，但我會盡我最大的努力來滿足你的需求。如果不夠，寫信給我，我會找另一個更好的地方。

　　希望你不久就來這兒！

　　所有最好的！

　　你的

　　李華

　　滿分理由：本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。

　　范文二：

　　Dear Bob,

　　Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

　　I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

　　Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

　　Best wishes !

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的鮑，

　　歡迎來到中國！你寫信給我找個地方給你。

　　我已經找到了一套公寓附近的芳草街薦新學校。它在第三層，里面有三個房間：一間臥室，一間廚房和一間浴室。臥室里有一張床，一張沙發，一張桌子和一把椅子。房子面積25平方米，每月租金500元。

　　也從這所房子你可以很容易地到你的學校。就在樓前的汽車站乘11路公共汽車。它只是一站。最后，請你告訴我你到達的時間嗎？然后我就可以去機場接你，看到你。

　　最美好的祝愿！

　　你的

　　李華

　　范文三：

　　滿分理由：本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用準確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。

　　Dear Bob,

　　How are you these days?

　　I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

　　There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的鮑，

　　這些天你怎么了？

　　我很高興知道你會來我們的城市學習中文。你讓我找個地方給你。現在我發現了一個我認為很不錯的。這個地方是在芳草街11號附近的巴士站。它只是一個停止遠離建中文學校。

　　有三間房間，一間廚房，一間浴室和一間臥室。雖然不是很大，只有25平方米，我覺得很適合。按方式，每月租金為500元。我希望你會喜歡它。如果沒有，我會試著找另一個地方給你。

　　你的，

　　李華

　　滿分理由：本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。

　　范文四：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.

　　You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.

　　Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的鮑，

　　我很高興你要來學中文。我已經找到你在我們學校附近的一所房子。我想告訴你一些關于它的事。

　　你可能會得到關于No.ll巴士曹芳街，下一站就是建新中文學校。這房子離學校很近。大約25平方米。在臥室里有一張床，一張靠窗的沙發和一張靠窗的桌子。你可以在桌子上找到一個燈，在它旁邊有一把椅子。有另外兩個房間連接的臥室。左邊的'是一間浴室，右邊的是廚房。所以你可以自己做飯。這房子的租金是每月500元。

　　希望你會喜歡呆在這里！

　　你的，

　　李華

　　滿分理由：本文內容具體，詳略得當，表述方式很有創造力和新意，長短句并用，語言結構富于變化，錯落有致，順暢圓潤，尤其是情態動詞和分詞的運用很獨到，為文章增色不少。

　　范文五：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m glad to hear from you.

　　Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

　　The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

　　It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

　　Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的鮑，

　　我很高興收到你的來信。

　　歡迎到我們的城市在九月。我找到了一個適合你的房子。

　　房子在芳草街，從建中文學校不遠。如果你乘11路公共汽車，它只是一個停止。

　　這是一棟第三層的公寓樓。它有三個房間，一個客廳，一個浴室和一個廚房。你可以自己做飯。鏡子、盆和浴缸對你很方便。客廳里有一張床、一張沙發和一張椅子。桌子在窗戶旁邊。這將是很好的學習。總面積為25平方米，每月租金500元。

　　你會滿意這個單位，或者你想要另一個嗎？只是讓我知道。我會盡我所能幫助你。

　　你的，

　　李華

　　滿分理由：本文內容詳實，描述具體細膩，用詞適當準確，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。

　　中考英語滿分作文:給校長的一封信 A Letter to the University President

　　Direction： For this part， you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic： A letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus， you should write at least 100 words， and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below：

　　假設你是李偉，請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫了一封信，內容涉及食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環境、服務等等，可以是表揚，可以是批評建議，也可以兼而有之。

　　滿分作文：

　　January 11th

　　Dear Mr. President，

　　As a regular student at our college， I have some complaint to make about the canteen service on campus.

　　Frstly， the canteen environment is very bad. Actually， it is becoming more and more crowded and noisy with an ever larger presence of vocational students every term. Secondly， the canteen workers are bad-mannered. Far from being warm and kind-hearted， they always seem to be cold and rude to us students. Thirdly and most importantly， the dishes at our canteen are too expensive， though they are by no means good quality or delicious. The survey the Student Union carried out last week reveals that on average a student will spend 10 to 12 yuan on meals every day. This is for more than the food expenses of students in the neighborhood colleges.

　　Nutritious and delicious meals well within the students‘ means are very important for young students. I really wish measures could be taken to improve our canteen service.

　　親愛的總統先生，作為一個普通學生在大學，我有一些投訴作出關于校園食堂的服務。首先，餐廳的環境很糟糕。事實上，它正變得越來越擁擠和嘈雜的一個更大的存在對高職高專學生每學期。其次，食堂工人不禮貌。沒有溫暖和善良，他們似乎總是很冷，對我們無禮的學生。再次，最重要的是，我們食堂的菜太貴了，但他們絕不是優質美味。調查學生會上周進行顯示，平均一個學生會花10到12元每天的飯菜。這是比在附近高校的學生伙食費。營養美味在學生吃飯的青年學生是非常重要的。我真的希望可以采取措施改善我們的食堂服務。

　　A letter for parents一封給我父母的信

　　Dec.6th

　　Dear dad and mum,

　　I have been very happy in the school. Sometimes, at night I cry in the bed because I miss you very much. You always say “Learn well and I will be happy.” So I work hard in the school every day. After class I play with my classmates. We skip rope, play cards and ball and so on. I spend a lot of time doing my homework. When I finish, I play Pingpong with my friends. Then I spend some time reading my English notes. At six o’clock I have my evening class. Then I have my evening snack at twenty past seven. After that, I have some free time. At eight o’clock, I go to bed. This is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell me “Happiness is very important in our life.” So I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please.

　　Yours,

　　Laura

　　親愛的爸爸媽媽，

　　我在學校非常開心，有時候，晚上躺在床上我會忍不住掉眼淚因為我非常想念你們。你總是說“好好學習，我們會很高興。”所以我在學校每天都很努力。下課后我和同學一起玩，跳繩，打牌和打球等。我花了一段時間做家庭作業，之后我和朋友一起打乒乓球。然后，我花一些時間閱讀英語筆記。六點鐘上夜課，七點二十分鐘吃宵夜。在那之后，我有一些空閑時間。八點鐘，我就上床睡覺了。媽媽這就是我在學校的一天，你總是告訴我：“生活中最重要的是快樂。”所以，我要天天快樂。如果你不快樂，給我打電話吧。

　　此致，

　　勞拉

　　高考英語作文預測：邀請函

　　邀請函

　　假定你是李華，你的一位美國朋友Jane在中國學習中文兩年，即將回國。現在由你給她發E-mail，邀請她參加為她舉辦的歡送會，要點如下：

　　(1)祝賀她順利通過考試，她的學習進步很大，為她驕傲;

　　(2)感謝她幫助你們學習英語;

　　(3)時間：星期六晚六點;

　　(4)地點：陽光俱樂部(The Sun Club)302房間;

　　(5)路線：在你所住賓館門口乘坐332路公共汽車可直達。

　　注意：

　　(1)須包括以上主要內容，可以適當增加細節，使內容連貫;

　　(2)詞數：100左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　(3)參考詞匯：歡送會 farewell party

　　Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.

　　____________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【猜題理由】該素材圍繞與學生的日常生活相關的話題，體現"生活化"的特點。本篇寫作要求寫一篇邀請函，能夠充分體現生活實際和語言的交際功能。

　　【構思點撥】寫邀請函時一方面需要說明邀請理由，另 一方面要把活動的時間、地點、乘車路線等細節問題一定要交代清楚。

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Jane,

　　Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

　　It's pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way，you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.

　　I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua